Dread vs Twizzle

Even though your partner never responded, you'll still be evaluated for bonus points!

Your attack begins in paragraph 3:
-1 Unrealism ~ A good plan, but not quite realistic. Twizzle, being smaller, would have a hard time reaching the top of the opponent's head without being countered at the neck, which would be exposed during this maneuver. Additionally, realistically, Twizzle would have already been attacked before reaching the opponent's hip.
Still, you earn a +1 for Fairness for using the word "tried," allowing the opponent to counter and avoiding powerplaying.
You also receive a +1 for clearness since, even though unrealistic, the writing is legible and the attack can be visualized clearly.

Paragraph 4
+1 Fairness for providing cases where Twizzle fails so that the opponent can calculate an attack of which they may dodge. +1 Clearness for making your attacks legible and understandable. +1 Realism for accounting for distance, physical capability, and physics.



@twizzle , I would work on details, and being very specific with your attacks. Although your attacks are udnerstandable, they are vague. You will be moving onto the next round, and you have a change to make it to the end, but to do so you will need to add more detail. The more you write, the more points you can potentially earn! Think of it this way: Each paragraph you write that involves an attack can potentially earn you up to 3 points for Clarity, Fairness and Realism. Each paragraph. Paragraphs dedicated to the reaction to your opponent's attack, if you acknowledge their attack and react to the hindering effects of it, can guarantee you a full point for Realism. So, overall, the more detail, the more potential points you can earn. Since your partner didn't respond and you're now a bit behind the others because of it (not your fault!), you'll really need to step up on this during the next battle so you can catch up!

(: I hope this helps you during your next battle!