Azriel vs Azazel

+ 1 Clarity // Initial attack is clear and easy for those new to roleplaying, or those uneducated in wolf anatomy/movements.
+ 1 Fairness // Post takes weight and size into account.
+1 Realism // Section includes the difficulties of the provided position, stating that pain would come with the movement of Azriel's opponent.
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+ 1 Clarity, + 1 Fairness, + 1 Realism; the post demonstrated all three of these categories through Azriel's hind legs having buckled, and the actions that followed.
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+ 1 Clarity, + 1 Fairness, + 1 Realism; the post demonstrated the flaws and strengths of the provided attack sufficiently, as well as the odds of success.
Total: +8

+ 1 Clarity // Attacks are explained shortly, uncomplicated, and thorough.
- 1 Fairness // Only strengths were pointed out throughout the post, no weaknesses or flaws added - the only one being the slightly pain in his rump, which faded away.
+ 1 Realism // All moves included are realistic, as they are attacks that would be preformed by real wolves.
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- 1 Clarity // While sufficient, the attempt to break Azriel's leg remains vague. This type of tack tends to require a way to sharply snap the bone, which would need a sharp movement of the head, which would be an opening for Azriel - something not included.
+ 1 Fairness // Wolf's claws are dull, thus they would not cause much damage; this was included within the post.
+ 1 Realism // All attacks portrayed were simple, and easily done in real situations.
Total: + 4
(Last paragraph does not contain an attack.)